Thursday, 17 March 2016

Hook's Volcano Narrative

We have been learning about Hook and Im hook thing is Dialogue.

“I wish I had a friend,” said the volcano in the middle of the Ocean one day a long long time ago.He was so sad because he was alone everyday ever night.Then he signed a song so it could keep him kamperen.Will he was sing his song and sinking under the water a lady was listing all that time he was sing.Then he sunk and then the lady erupted and erupted until till she got to the top on the surface.The she was looking for the man who was sing the song.Then she sing the song and he heard under the water’’his song was sang by someone the erupt and erupt to get bigger and bigger then they both came together and sang the song.And they both lived happily after.THE  END

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