Wednesday, 7 June 2017

Getting Paid To come to school

Walt: Identify

Hey you there, student going to school and not getting paid! I agree that children should get paid to go to go school. Otherwise everyday your parents would have to pay for you to go to school willingly. If the school pays for you then you have more of a chance to not worry about paying money everyday for your child.

I believe that schools should pay for you to come to school because parents don't have that much money. They will most likely pay for your lunch at school, unlike if your parents were to pay for you to come to school then you're probably have no lunch to take to school.

Parents send you to school and if your parents were to pay for you to come to school I reckon that the teachers should get 20 dollars or so because the parents are paying for them to come to school. The children should get one hundred dollars a month twenty dollars a week.

Your parents should get that much money each week because your parents are paying for you to come to school everyday. So I agree that teachers should pay for you to come to school!

 I have learnt how to persuade and convince an audience to believe my opinion?


  1. Hi Tom!

    I hope that you are having a nice break and staying warm and dry! If you are inside, hiding out from the rain and looking for something fun to do this holiday, please join the Winter Learning Journey. It's a free blogging programme that helps you practice your reading and writing skills and keeps you connected with your friends and classmates over the school break!

    To participate, log onto the Winter Learning Journey website and click on the 'Weekly Activities' tab. You will find 21 different activities on the website to choose from. To complete an activity, simply post your answer on your school blog site and we will read your answer and post a comment. We will also give you points and, at the end of the holiday, come back to your school to give you a Participation Certificate. We will also bring prizes for the top three bloggers in the school.

    Please consider joining us this holiday! We'd love to blog with you!

    Rachel and the Winter Learning Journey blogging team