The Space Race

This is the space race work that ive been working on. It was good reading about the United Sates of America how they manege to place there flag on the moon.

Speech

The First video is my speech reflection and the last one is my speech that I gave in front of my class room.

Getting Paid To come to school

Walt: Identify

Hey you there, student going to school and not getting paid! I agree that children should get paid to go to go school. Otherwise everyday your parents would have to pay for you to go to school willingly. If the school pays for you then you have more of a chance to not worry about paying money everyday for your child.

I believe that schools should pay for you to come to school because parents don't have that much money. They will most likely pay for your lunch at school, unlike if your parents were to pay for you to come to school then you're probably have no lunch to take to school.

Parents send you to school and if your parents were to pay for you to come to school I reckon that the teachers should get 20 dollars or so because the parents are paying for them to come to school. The children should get one hundred dollars a month twenty dollars a week.

Your parents should get that much money each week because your parents are paying for you to come to school everyday. So I agree that teachers should pay for you to come to school!

 I have learnt how to persuade and convince an audience to believe my opinion?

Recount plan

WALT: Write A Recount

This is my recount plan. Its about what we done last week the year 7's stayed at school and had a cool time while some year 8's helped around the schools and help the year 7's to get some of there actives done.

Sniff, Swing, Swipe.

This is my drawing that I have drew.This is for the animals at the zoo so it can keep them entertained so they will have fun.But I feel sorry for there cousin's because they are having fun while there cousin's are looking for food and the wild stuff, and the animals in the zoo get everything.

Independent & Dependant

 WALT  Identify independent and dependent clauses? Identify the subject and a predicate of a claus? Identify the features of complex sentences

This is my Independent and dependent writing that I have done for this week. The Independent means it is a group of words that contains a subject and a predicate tells us  the subject is or what the subject is doing.
 EXAMPLE?

Max loves to eat.     Loves to eat is the predicate because its the rest of your sentience. 

Now the subject, the subject Is a person, place or thing. For EXAMPLE?

Josh went to the shop? So the subject will be josh because josh is the subject and the predicate is went to the shop.

Explanation17WritingSample

A Special Place? Special Place for me is School because we can learn more about stuff that we never knew before and improving better at maths,reading and writing. Also I like playing with my friends eating with them sharing,Being in a sports team and playing for our School so we can win games for our School so Pt England will be happy with us. Mostly Being a team Leader for our School and learning the new stuff in team five like

Responsibility, Responding on time,Being a role model to the teachers and year 8. That's what I to don't in team five from the year and next year when I am a year 8.

Another Reason special thing in the community is the library because you get to reading a whole stack of book. I normally pick one and read it to like Chapter 3 or 4 then i go on the computer to learn more about stuff. Like how are stuff, Who's the older person in the world like does stuff. That's what I do at the library most of the times and sometimes stay there until it closes.

The Final place in the community is my amazing house I love it because I can't help myself to the food sleep whenever I wont but I hardly sleep at home so I just play rugby with my older brothers and sisters. Use the wifi all the time to finish of my work that I didn't complete from school.

These are all the reason I love and adore in the community and the places I love the mostly and what I do in that community.

The one with the letter in blue means I fixed it up and the bottom one is my normal work test that I have done first.

A Special Place? Special Place for me is School because we can learn more about stuff that we never knew before and improving better at maths,reading and writing. Also like playing with my friends eating with them sharing,Being in a sports team and playing for our School so we can win games for our School so Pt England will be happy with us. Mostly Being a team Leader for our School and learning the new stuff in team five like

Responsibility, Responding on time,Being a role model to the teachers and year 8. That's what i to don't in team five from the year and next year when I am a year 8.

Another Reason special thing in the community is the library because you get to reading a whole stack of book. I normally pick one and read it to like Chapter 3 or 4 then i go on the computer to learn more about stuff. Like how are stuff, Who's the older person in the world like does stuff. That's what i do at the library most of the times and sometimes stay there until it closes.

The Final place in the community is my amazing house I love it because I can't help myself to the food sleep whenever I wont but I hardly sleep at home so I just play rugby with my older brothers and sisters. Use the wifi all the time to finish of my work that I didn't complete from school.

These are all the reason I love and adore in the community and the places I love the mostly and what I do in that community.

Tom Independant and dependant clauses - Syntax

This is my writing for this week.

The Tonga Ninja

                       The Tonga Ninja

40 years ago? There was a ninja called Fuma Kotaro he had 4                     sidekick helpers. There names were Hattori Hanzo, Jinichi Kawakami, Momochi Sandayu and Ishikawa Goemon. That was his 4 sidekick helpers they went everywhere together. But mostly what they had to do was to protect their house and save crime. They were trying to protect their house from the Dopey Boys .

They wanted to destroy the Tonga Ninja because they were enemies when they were little. The Dopey Boys always had problems with the Tonga Ninja’s and was a disgrace to them.

Tonga Ninja’s save the day until the Dopey boys come ahead and distract the Tonga Ninja from taking them away so the bad criminal don't go to jail . So they couldn't do anything to them because they were gone. So they just headed back to their headquarters. They have heaps of bodyguards why would they need that when they are already strong. This Is their headquarters they been hair since they were 22 years old but now all of them are in they’re 40. But it sill looks fresh and clean.

Then they have a nice sleep till the next morning and go save Glen Innes From the who are staring problems and keeping G.I a happy and better place. So there will be no more crime in this wonderful particular suburb.

Kete of Knowledge

This week in our reading class we learnt about the three kete of knowledge. It is three bag and dose bags are called Mind Body and soul. What Do you think you can put in dose three kete.