Hooking In

WALT:Writhing Introductions that orientate and hook in our audience.

First Try:

This term team 4 have been learning about trade and enterprise, Our trade and enterprise  means that you choose a  business group that you would like to be in. Well you could choose any group that you like,well I am in jewellery.

With a?

Have you did something so cool before? Well this term team 4 have been learning about trade and enterprise. Our trade and enterprises we have six groups that make stuff.Guess what my group makes? I am In jewelry and we make looms.

With a!This term team 4 have been learning about trade and enterprise.We are making bracelets for people.If you come to use we Order it now!

With facts

Have you did something so cool before? Well this term team 4 have been learning about trade and enterprise. Our trade and enterprises we have six groups that make stuff. I am In jewelry and Our group we make stuff like bracelet and stuff that you would like to buy.