Thursday, 13 August 2015

Grass To Glass-Part 1

Walt: Add detail to the end of sentences.
Cows eat 70 kilograms of grass a day, or In the winter they can eat silage instead of grass. This is  like me eating 70 packs of chocolate a day.Did you know that 70 kg is as twice as to kids?

Cows have four stomachs, compared to us we only have 1 stomachs .Cows have four stomachs which they eat there grass and It goes into their stomachs.

Milking happens twice a day, and it can not be missed ever.In the olden days farms use to use there hands to milk the cow, but now we have a machine that milkes the cow. They produce 30 litres of milk into a bottle so we can drink It.

Now days milking machines do all the hard work ,so it is easy for the farms.Now we have a machine that milkes the cow and It gose Into and big thing where all the milk comes out of the cows.


1 comment:

  1. I like the way you have a variety of sentence lengths in your paragraphs Tom. You have worked hard to add clauses to the ends of simple sentences to make them more detailed.